writing in the raw form
just a bit of shameless self promotion.
i have a bit of story up on Fictionpress.com that i wrote a long time ago (roughly 2003-2004 time period)
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2688478/1/Lost_World_RPC
it's the prequel to my larger work, Project 8-13, which is forever in re-writes. i'm going to be posting the first version, the oldest, more raw writing of mine in that project/universe on FP.
so go, read, and enjoy. and tell me what you think.
mind you, my writing has gotten much better since then. i've learned to use Spell Check (though i choose to ignore that button lol!)